Analysis of Sweet Sin: A Breathless Journey



You move past me
...breathe in
...breathe out
Sweet sin in a breeze
....breathe in
....breathe out
My mind races through possibilities
....breathe in
....breathe out
Soft skin and gentle caresses (such sweet sin)
....breathe in
....breathe out
We lock eyes and I am swept up in the world of you...shhhhh
Don't talk, just be still and ever present
in a moment
in my haze
in my daze
Of you and me and tangled sheets (such sweet sin)
....breathe in
....breathe out
Now say good morning


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111 10 11 11001 10 11 111010100 10 11 11010010111 10 11 1110111100111 1111101010 0010 011 011 11010101111 10 11 11110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 487
Words 91
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 350
Words per stanza (avg) 86

About this poem

That deep seeded desire to throw caution to the wind and give in to those dark desires

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Written on April 19, 2024

Submitted by DNCrim77 on April 19, 2024

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