Analysis of Sweet Sin: A Breathless Journey
Violet Echo 1977 (IN)
You move past me
...breathe in
...breathe out
Sweet sin in a breeze
....breathe in
....breathe out
My mind races through possibilities
....breathe in
....breathe out
Soft skin and gentle caresses (such sweet sin)
....breathe in
....breathe out
We lock eyes and I am swept up in the world of you...shhhhh
Don't talk, just be still and ever present
in a moment
in my haze
in my daze
Of you and me and tangled sheets (such sweet sin)
....breathe in
....breathe out
Now say good morning
Scheme | aBCdBCdBCbBCeffggbBCh |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 10 11 11001 10 11 111010100 10 11 11010010111 10 11 1110111100111 1111101010 0010 011 011 11010101111 10 11 11110 |
Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 487 |
Words | 91 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 21 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 350 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 86 |
About this poem
That deep seeded desire to throw caution to the wind and give in to those dark desires
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