Analysis of Promises



When I look into your eyes I can see all my rewards for being in your life and I can see my failures, how can I keep the war of good and evil from colliding. I know in my heart that I need you and all the love you have for me to put these feelings into words are not as easy for me as for some I let down my guard and let my feelings take over I want you to take this heart of mine in your hands hold it close to your heart and fill if up with all the love you can so I know my failures will never haunt me again, to be in your arms forever, in your heart as a lover, in your life as the man of your dreams only you deserve only time will tell where our place in this world will be and when to take place, so I leave you this promise as you hold my heart with yours, and that promise is to love only you with open arms and a open heart and with that promise I also will love you faithfully forever


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Characters 897
Words 196
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 695
Words per line (avg) 196
Letters per stanza (avg) 695
Words per stanza (avg) 196
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Written on April 30, 2024

Submitted by celticwarlock2023 on May 01, 2024

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