Analysis of Ashes in the Wind



             Ashes in the Wind
        By Nancy Rodriquez

We are ashes in the wind,
Hoping to find a better day ,
To reunite our love which will not bend ,
Even when tested come what may ,
There has been turmoil and great pain ,
On this journey we are on,
Forever we have been changed ,
Come back to where we belong ,
We are pushing forward in a positive way ,
We have gathered all of the pieces of our hearts ,
Turned skies sunny instead of gray ,
Clawed our path through with valor and strength ,
To reunite in a bright tomorrow ,
Forgetting the strain of past sorrow ,
This flame not being quenched at all ,
Our lives restarting after a crushing fall.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10001 110010 1110001 10110101 1011011111 10110111 1111011 1110111 0101111 1111101 111010001001 1110110101101 11100111 1101111001 10100101 010011110 11110111 101010100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 656
Words 131
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 16
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 245
Words per stanza (avg) 64

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Twin flame journey

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Written on March 05, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on March 05, 2024

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Nancy Rodriquez

I have been writing poetry since I was 14 years old. I am now 57. I live in Fort Worth, Texas. I plan to have two children's books published by the Summer of 2023. "Elroy the Elephant, and Charlie the Squirrel. Both have my poetry in them. more…

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