Analysis of Unwillingness



Love abounds a great mystery,
It aquires the search to be found,
Unbroken but tamed, a heart soo
Lost but willing to be named.
Iridescent lights that harbor the soul,
Yet so bright and yet dimmed by the
Darkness of night, laying silent in fear
Of what may come but never willing to be told.

Soo many stars to be wished upon, the silent
cry To be loved, such a loud emotion and not
Enough physical devotion to be thereof, to reach
For what desires they possess and unwillingness
Just forms regrets. They hear the lyrics in their
head,  pushing dreams of unconscious desires but leaves them in dread.

They say the heart wants and needs, you can pretend to not hear but it only deceives. Like Spring covered by Fall, the spirit leads and will rip the veil from thine eyes and leave you feeling raw. Walking around in a technicolor dream only to find that you were chained to a perception and from a nightmare that grieves.

Just continue to lie in soo many ways, just keep believing it's all you have and you shall die in the sea of the crashing waves.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10101100 1101111 01011011 1110111 010111001 11101110 1011101001 111111010111 110111101010 111110101001 0110001011111 1101010100100 11011101001 110111001011101 110110111011111110111101101010110111101110110010010011011110110010010111 10101101101110101111011100110101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,063
Words 213
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 208
Words per stanza (avg) 49

About this poem

Sometimes love can be Misunderstood. Feelings of hurt and miss communication. But ultimately forms regret and pain and is hard to rise above.

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Written on April 10, 2023

Submitted by DarkRoseRoom on January 22, 2024

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