Analysis of Old Mules



Old mules.
Steps away.
From being sent to a pasture.
Grazing on grass for the rest,
Of their numbered days.
Prepared to race as if thoroughbreds.
One with a fictioned vision.
And the other with eyes on a future.
A future with promise,
For those much younger groomed to lead.
But listen they do,
To an old mule.
With nothing more to do to prove,
It is only an ego to feed it.
Left to assume and believe,
This race to run has already been won.
Rather or not,
Neither one is fit to cross the finish line!


Scheme ABCDEFGCHIJKLMNGOP
Poetic Form
Metre 11 101 11011010 1011101 11101 011111101 110110 0010111010 010110 11110111 11011 1111 11011111 1110110111 1101001 1111101011 1011 10111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 501
Words 115
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 386
Words per stanza (avg) 98
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Written on January 17, 2024

Submitted by lpahtillah on January 17, 2024

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