Analysis of To Mom

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



To Mom. I'm sorry for the three words I could never say to you. But try to understand that it was not you; it was me. I know you can never understand how I feel deep down inside. But it still hurts me and makes me want to cry. The pain never ends; it stays with me, and there is no place to run or hide; it finds me every time. Please take my hand so that I may understand why. But I will try one last time. Before I heard that last chime. And here it is: I love you and always will.


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Characters 484
Words 104
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 364
Words per line (avg) 104
Letters per stanza (avg) 364
Words per stanza (avg) 104

About this poem

I could never say I love you to my mother she always asked me why I have no reason why. It's just me. And it does hurt now that she's gone. Them three words scared the hell out of me till this day I don't know why?

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Written on March 12, 2022

Submitted by alanswansea18 on December 29, 2023

Modified by alanswansea18 on December 30, 2023

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