Analysis of Fumbling in Starlight: Infinite Yearning's Dance
I once wished to pluck all stars from blackened skies
Just to illuminate your dreary, darkened nights
But failed, as feeble hands cannot grasp such heights
Nor comprehend the depth of your soul's cries
This longing heart envisioned a thousand ways
To gift you love, though clumsy in its chase
These hands still fumble in their timid embrace
While yours effortlessly light my dusky days
What is this love that speaks an unknown tongue?
That knows not how to woo nor to enchant
Yet burns with fevered passion by your side
Seeking your glance amid the thoughtless throng
I choose you, just the same, my lovely saint
In all your mysteries, I shall still abide
My sunken ship explores your hidden fathoms
Though ignorance leaves me blindly out of depth
Still I attempt to scale your silent cliffs
Grasping at wisps of clouds with desperate hands
But loving you remains beyond my grasp
Your boundless being, I cannot hope to clasp
Yet my heart insists to trace your distances
Through uncharted oceans filled with unknown risks
What strange enchantment lures me to your shores?
Despite the storms, I'm helplessly enthralled
Crashing myself against your rocky walls
Only to be swept out again, and left forlorn
But something deeper calls me back once more
To brave the waves and tempests of your world
These earthbound wings can never reach your heights
Where your splendid spirit freely takes its flight
Beyond the limits where my thoughts take shape
But though you soar in realms beyond my sight
My anchored heart still yearns to join your dance
Through clouded skies of sun and rain's romance
Unable to contain your vast infinity
Still I ache to share your rare sublimity
And wander lost, within your mysteries
Here on earth, I grasp for hands I cannot see
Yet my soul embraces you most fervently
In awe, I welcome all you choose to be
What strange enigma has entranced my mind?
That loves so deeply, yet cannot define
The nameless yearning that has seized my days
A hopeless quest, but one my heart obeys
For only you can set its rhythms right
And lead me from the darkness into light
These eager hands once tried to cage your spirit
But found your wings could never be held here
Your restless soul ever remains beyond
No earthly chains can make you less than free
Now humbled, I seek only to set you free
In all your glory, just as you must be
I stand before an oracle, mute and blind
Whose secrets taunt, but never can be pried
By force or cunning to reveal their wise
Yet something deeper calls me to your side
To simply bask within your shining rays
And not demand what you cannot display
For now I know that words cannot divulge
The mysteries that in your heart emerge
I can but marvel, lovingly bemused
By truths beyond my present earthly views
And pledge myself, to gently walk with you
Down whatever paths that you may next pursue
This ignorant heart once tried to grasp and hold
What cannot be contained, but slips away
Much like the mist that wreathes the gaping hills
Now emptied hands are open to receive
Whatever gifts of self you wish to give
In simplicity, not asking, I believe
Now freed from vain ambition's selfish dreams
My heart has found a truer kind of wealth
In treasuring your happiness and health
No longer bound by fear, desire, or doubt
I seek in selflessness to give my all
To nurture that rare light within your soul
How foolish once I thought to own your heart
As if your love were mine alone to hoard
This arrogant self now knows a humbler part
To simply love without demanding more
To ask how best I might support your way
And walk this path with you from day to day
Your abiding love remains mystery
I cannot grasp or ever hope to earn
Yet gratefully I welcome all you gift
Without the need for bargain, toll or trade
For loving you is payment in itself
I ask no more than what you wish to make
Though oft I stumble, falter, lose my way
Still something deeper draws me back to you
As sun-kissed meadows call the wandering bee
Your vibrant spirit stirs my slumbering soul
Awakening this heart to live more true
To all the beauty that you help me see
For loving you has nurtured life within
Where once my barren heart had left me waste
You are the springtime to my weary winter
The joy that helps me bloom amid life's storms
With you, my fallow fields grow gold again
As faith and hope are gently reborn
What grace is this, that out of dust and ash
You raise new life, and make my spirit soar?
The more I love, the more I understand
The depth and breadth of your unending song
Each verse reveals new nuances to me
Beyond the limits of my mortal grasp
Yet loving you remains so sweet and clear
The purest note my hollow breast can sound
To love is to be filled yet left desiring
Quenched yet thirsty in the same moment
Like drinking from the freshest, coolest stream
That trickles through a parched and dusty land
Always I long for more of your rare wine
Intoxicated, yet forever revived
Your abiding love remains deep mystery
That far outreaches reasoning's cold grasp
Yet I surrender gladly, come what may
To the strange enchantment you have cast
Content to be enraptured by your spell
And follow where your graceful footsteps lead.
The poem is part of a full version found in the book “Homo Sapiens” Part Part I - XVIII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular “Homo Sapiens” book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the “Homo Sapiens” series, as well as other books by the same author. So, don’t hesitate and get a copy today from one of the many online bookstores. Khublei Shihajar Nguh, (Dhanewad )(Thank you )
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 5,971 |
Words | 1,222 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 121 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 121 |
Letters per line (avg) | 38 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 38 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 9 |
About this poem
This poignant poem explores the speaker's unattainable yet profound love, comparing it to chasing stars and navigating stormy seas. It beautifully captures the essence of longing, humility, and a selfless commitment to understanding and embracing the mysteries of the beloved. The verses eloquently express the complexity of love's yearning, acknowledging the inability to fully grasp its depths while cherishing the beauty and transformative power it brings.
Written on November 11, 2023
Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 10, 2023
Modified by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 12, 2023
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