Analysis of You Leave Me Breathless



I know we are all made of stardust,
but not the stars, you leave me breathless,
while the continuous fusion of your passion
gives birth to a love that can save me from loneliness.

With your gaze you melt the cold that is my mask,
and the heart feels the explosion of a big bang,
like a supernova your energetic temperament
says that you are inevitably my fifth element.

I am sure of you, even though my experiences threaten me,
such as sure the passage of Halley's Comet,
you bring colors into my life like aurora polaris,
with you I want everything, I don't accept compromise.


Scheme XAXA XXBB XXAX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 11111111 110111110 100100101110 1110111111100 11111011111 001100101011 100101010100 11110100011100 11111101101000101 1110101110 111001111010010 111110110110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 579
Words 117
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

"You Leave Me Breathless" is a poem from a collection of poetry entitled "When you stay alone". If you liked it and want to order your copy of the book, you can through Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/dp/8690558810

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Submitted by beban.ng on November 02, 2023

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