Analysis of My marbles



The other day~
I was walking down the street
       to my Do Wah Diddy beat

When a perfectly~
Strange……Stranger
       came right on up to me

He said “Hey Mam~
       Have you lost your marbles?”

I said “Yes, yes~
       Have you found them?”

He said “No Mammmm~
       But if I do, I Will Let You Know!

“Dang………….
                                 I forgot to give him my phone number”

c
                                                                       bpp


Scheme XAA BCB DX XX DX XC BX
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 1110101 1111101 10100 110 111111 1111 111110 1111 1111 1111 111111111 1 1011111110 1 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 586
Words 79
Sentences 5
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 33
Words per stanza (avg) 9

About this poem

Time for a little humor. It is always fun to write a little humor about oneself as long as it is done with love and laughter.

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Written on October 20, 2021

Submitted by Caliconine on October 25, 2023

Modified by Caliconine on October 25, 2023

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