Analysis of Down



From headstone of a tombstone
lies a man without a name
Bound and gagged into earthen home
burying away dark shame

Floodwater washes sanity to ocean
evil tide pulling me away
Moons gone; hand of fate in motion
burned by the flame

Drag river's deep a few times
rise within twisted shallows
murky mind seeping like slime
hold breath; down we go


Scheme XAXA BXBA CCXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 11101 1010101 10101101 1000111 1010100110 10110101 11111010 1101 1101011 101101 1011011 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 344
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on September 16, 2023

Submitted by rossington4200 on October 17, 2023

Modified by rossington4200 on October 17, 2023

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