Analysis of My Love

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



said, she
is still missing me...

the same way
she tells me

i love you,

even though,
we talk for hours

each and every day

even fall asleep
together and apart...

she's the one
who holds my heart
in her hands

whenever i am confused,
she understands

revealing how she longs
to kiss and hold me close...

and so do i
express
my need to be there

so many ways

by the secret
of our minds,

between your thoughts
and mine

searching the very point

our worlds meet

where we are each
at places

just beyond each
others reach,

to grasp, we must
move a touch further

to get where
we must take that leap

beyond the familiar

into the sublime

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Scheme AA BA X XX B CD XDE XE XX XXF X XX XX X X GX GG XH FC H X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11 11101 011 111 111 101 11110 101001 10101 010001 101 1111 001 0101101 101 010111 110111 0111 01 11111 1101 1010 1101 0111 01 100101 1011 1111 110 1011 101 1111 10110 111 11111 010010 01001 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 695
Words 173
Sentences 4
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on 2015

Submitted by Charles2 on October 03, 2023

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