Analysis of Your Time Is Your Life



Your Time
By Chris Commodore©2010

Your time is your life; minimize future strife.
Make time for yourself, your wealth and your health,
Let time be the marker that paces the way;
Each second, each minute, each hour each day.

The saddest pain, the saddest mark;
Is to look back at life, and see ghosts staring back;
With a mirror they show, prized time spent in vain;
Occasions devalued, time flushed down the drain.

Oh yes, now you say it, if only you knew.
Wish time could turn back, rewind nature's clock;
But that's just so wishful, can never come true,
Even if you run backwards for miles round the block.

Oh careless choices, assessments ill planned;
Decisions unthinking, beds too quickly made.
Actions so hurried, leaves nothing in hand;
Depleted life's deck, my best cards I've played.

Time not to regain, those hours fled fast,
Like spent autumn leaves, like wind-driven rain.
Soon chances and choices exist in the past;
Naught left for my comfort but regret and pain.

Each second misspent, each minute erased,
Adds up to the hour, life's portion ill-used.
But present conditions still proffer a chance,
Perhaps still time enough to enter the dance


Scheme XX XXAA XXBB CDCD EFEF GBGB XXHH
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1110 1111110101 1110111011 11101011001 11011011011 01010101 111111011101 10101111101 0100111101 11111111011 1111110101 11111011011 101111011101 1101001011 01001011101 1011011001 0101111111 1110111011 1110111101 11001001001 11111010101 1100111001 11101011011 11001011001 01110111001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,168
Words 227
Sentences 11
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

Upon seeing students wasting time in a remedial program in Boston in 2010. After reading the poem to the class, students wanted copies of it as daily reminder.

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Written on June 30, 2010

Submitted by ti.min on September 27, 2023

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