Analysis of U.nique S.ouls
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
Bringing passion,
from a well at depth inside
Where no touch of fear
nor false sense of pride
Sparks glistening like candlelight
Reflecting from tearful eyes.
Moistened lips, softly whispering
a song no one else can hear.
Simultaneously from afar
we sing of love unbound
Lifting weary minds
with sad streams of thought
Swept by unfulfilled promises.
Gentle yet painful emotions
bringing joyous cries.
Through the empty space between us
As fresh hope arrives
Settling into quiet places
where only the most treasured of dreams
With nowhere new
left to either run or hide.
(Right back where we started)
Slowing my heartbeat rhythm now.
Pulse, signals in a steady drumbeat.
My soul energies gently effervesce
into my dreams. Gently breathing,
Chest heaving like waves
which rise and fall
Blowing smoke rings
in the cool damp air
Issuing a tattoo
lost in your embrace
Held closely to kiss
a brief reply
To this dilemma we face …
without faltering
Day by day
step by step
side by side
Through these uncharted waters,
we ply
Unafraid of enormous risks …
of uncertainties
Cast gently adrift
with passions gift
like falling rain
One warm summers night
of gentle kisses
On and on we glide
with side effects
Elevate the mood
from imperceptible lows
To spellbinding highs,
building momentum
Trying to find that place within
Where our rhythms naturally coincide.
You and me as the moon and sea
Turning with the tidal flow of the universe
And so, as the sun works its magic
Deep within the burning sands
where we As soulmates born
do more together grow
In ways most meaningful
Becoming ever so much more complete.
Now and then, when finding myself
In the mix Sifting/mixing/blending
As if kneading the dough of yesterdays.
Letting it rise naturally
to be placed in the oven Baked
into the breads of tomorrow
Watched over carefully,
by us
Here and now
Unique
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Scheme | XA XA BC DX XX XX EX C FX EX GA X HI CD XX XX G JX K JD X XA XK XL MM XB EA X XX CX XA NX XX XO XI PD LN XO NF HX P |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1010 1011101 11111 11111 1100110 0101101 10110100 0111111 01000101 111101 10101 11111 1101100 10110010 10101 10101011 11101 100011010 110011011 111 1110111 111110 1011101 11000101 11100101 01111010 11011 1101 1011 00111 100001 10101 11011 0101 1101011 01100 111 111 111 1101010 11 0110101 10100 11001 1101 1101 11101 11010 10111 1101 1001 101001 1101 10010 10111101 11010100001 10110101 10101011010 011011110 1010101 11111 110101 011100 0101011101 1011101 001101010 111001110 10111000 11100101 0101101 110100 11 101 01 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,997 |
Words | 422 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 41 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 75 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 37 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 8 |
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