Analysis of poetic love

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I want to keep my eyes shut if this is not my new chance at a happier reality, and the thought of you is not a lucky hand that I had, being I was the one calling every lover bluff but just one of my more lucid dreams.

I want to love you more and hold onto you a bit longer, knowing the answer is not inside the bottle of well-aged whiskey. Oh, my love, just kissing your lips makes me a little stronger.

Just the thought of you brings me to the rivers and the highways that I never went down, and to the end with you, I want to get up and travel, not just go.

We were just strangers until my words, which I would think of as poetry, brought us together inside of a storm that was the only forecasted weather for us, and now here we are, keeping each other warm.

There comes a time in every lonely travel mind when all the wishes on the ground are found, and every picture we take is a memory of this poetic love we make

These images that are inside of my heart or head are the exact words that I say now but never said before because I never knew that open arms can be called home, and with this poetic love that keeps my fire burning during the winter nights, I know this soul of mine will never be alone.


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Characters 1,211
Words 254
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 157
Words per line (avg) 41
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Written on September 11, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on September 11, 2023

Modified by Oakley on September 12, 2023

1:16 min read
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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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