Analysis of Treasure ship

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



As twilight plays with the gentle breeze
dawning skies painting magnificent pictures
on new horizons.  

A treasure ship drifts ever further on  
on its journey to destination beyond  

on the wind and sea
as we dream away the hours

warm and cozy by the fireside
beyond restrictions of time and space

locked in each other’s eyes,

heart and mind holding for dear life
to each other

With a firm, warm loving embrace,

you deliver here to my heart
comes from exotic faraway places  

i love you for that, too.

The best of what exists within me
responds in kind, returning  

Upon its own journey  

back to you

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme XAX XX BA XC X DX C XX E BX B E D
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 10110010010 11010 0101110101 1110101001 10101 11101010 10101010 010101101 101101 10110111 1110 10111001 10101111 1101010110 111111 011101011 0101010 011110 111 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 660
Words 147
Sentences 3
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 38
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Written on October 02, 2006

Submitted by Charles2 on August 20, 2023

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