Analysis of Poverty In A Lonely Land

Charles Edward York 1966 (Saigon, Vietnam)



Poverty In A Lonely Land

Speaking gratitude into the silence
I thank God for smiling on a lesser being
My means to survive are shrunken
Every decent serving of sustenance
Reminds me blessings
Come few and far between
Rain seldom showers
In a dry and thirsty desert.

Any meal I get is a miracle for me
Joy arrives when my belly is full again
So why should favor be shared
Only to me when so many starve?
Decency is a priced out thing
A convenience rarely given
Sorrow and suffering are twin faces
Worn by too many in a lonely land.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
No part of this poem may be used or reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any way or form or by any means electronic, mechanical, recording, or otherwise without the written permission of the author.*


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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 795
Words 152
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 2
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 36

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Poverty In A Lonely Land Speaking gratitude into the silence I thank God for smiling on a lesser being My means to survive are shrunken Every decent serving of sustenance Reminds me blessings Come few and far between Rain seldom showers In a dry and thirsty desert. Any meal I get is a miracle for me Joy arrives when my belly is full again So why should favor be shared Only to me when so many starve? Decency is a priced out thing A convenience rarely given Sorrow and suffering are twin faces Worn by too many in a lonely land. Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York No part of this poem may be used or reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any way or form or by any means electronic, mechanical, recording, or otherwise without the written permission of the author.* 

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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