Analysis of Good Mourning
I Love You,
An eye-opening face full of reality has missed the last call
So it went, it left a long time ago.
Trapped in this living destiny
Lost its way fate was too blind to see
The truth about being alive
Or the lie they claim that you go to die
Your soul died trapped alive
So the life you have endured is a lie
Torturing and using every living thing around
You could no longer stand to be seen or be around to believe in a helping hand
Help wouldn’t be any good, only prolonging the inevitable disease. Your Life no longer had "get out of jail Free" Passes available to escape
The truth Is your Life a Prison, a punishment, a sick Joke?
Do you know the answer Or the question of Life
There is a place spoken of in a dream before you were ever born
Where all is as it should be in the natural order called for,
A wild, sprawling, changing, productive nerve center for all the Living,
A place called Earth
Where you can see Green, red, blue, clear, Colors
Smelling tasty Scents Seeing exotic vision with clarity,
Feeling happy, sad, and hurt
So many of nature’s special reactions for life to maintain
A healthy order on its surface as it replenishes its inhabitants
Humans, NO! ANIMALS! Different, As every Living thing should be
Though the Earth
Is nothing as it should be,
Nothing makes sense to anyone
Almost; nothing is wild, sprawling, or changing anymore,
Neuropathy is consuming the Earths Productive Nerve Center
Feeling numbness, loss of touch, and an ever-growing changing Pain.
Today the Earth Fades Away;
no more bright beautiful Green,
life-giving Red is just contaminated Rust,
and no more oh so precious Blue in the sky
A time when waters clear liquid lost its sincere Dense Clarity,
now corrupted is the touch of nature, enslaving the Living Today’s Scents are synthetic,
even the natural smells have lost their potency to naturally attract reproductions Natural Cycle
Vision is no longer the main attraction,
It’s not important to See what you are Breeding,
less a coward be a true Animals Nurture
Living on Earth
There have been happy as the time when earth Began,
there were some times when there was a wish it would never end
Other times have been Sad as the time we all loved and lost,
a time when there was a wish our senses never translated
Spirals of educated ignorance shared by the wise, the owl, and Santa
Here to serve a purpose for natures assholes, freaks, or Policeman
Behaviors twisted, personalities lying, people who think less of Animals
The point of what you were reading Is to make you think what have you been doing or not
Do you care if die trying to save you?
Let me know what you think we should do about this reality And always remember I love you
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 111001111011011 1111101101 10110100 111111111 01011001 1011111111 111101 1011101101 10001010010101 111101111110110100101 111101100100010000111110111111100100101 011110100100011 111010101011 11011010010110101 1111111001001011 01101001011011010 0111 1111111110 1010110010101100 1010101 1101101001011101 01010111011110100 101100100110010111 101 1101111 1011110 110111011001 100101001010110 1010111011010101 0101101 1111001 11011101001 01111101001 0111011011011100 101010111010100111010 1001001111100110000101010010 10111001010 110101111110 101010110010 1011 111101011101 10111110111101 10111110111101 0111101101010010 101100100110101010 111010110111010 01010010010101111100 011110101111111111011 1111110111 1111111110111001010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 2,801 |
Words | 582 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 41 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 51 |
Letters per line (avg) | 42 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 52 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 12 |
About this poem
I was thinking about everything when i wrote this.
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