Analysis of It Should Not Take Decades



It should not take,
A repeating of deception.
For decades to have anyone,
Claiming to be unaware...
Of lies told.
Changing dramatically,
The sanity of their once normal life to live.

How crazed can minds become made to get?
To suddenly welcome threats of diversity.
The color of one's skin and ethnicity.
With descendents of bigots and racists,
Declaring themselves not to be replaced.
On a place their ancestors,
Arrived as immigrants.
Unable to speak the language.

Yet...
Came from foreign shores.
To deliberately replace those native born.
And then,
Expect them to teach what it is they do.
Done to steal and defend with weapons.
After pretending to be friends.
While taking away what does not belong...
To thieves who deceive.
Doing this never to leave the claim,
Ownership from an inheritance...
Bestowed upon them by corrupted ancestors!

And the beat goes on.
With renovated updates.
And the beat goes on.
Thieves declaring themselves victims,
While given authority...
To replace those they victimize.

And the beat goes on,
With the building of condos.
Luxurized.
By...
The gentrification of black neighborhoods.
And the beat goes on.
To prove,
What money to steal it can do.
Going on.
To prove,
Who is subjected to move.
And become the ones who have been...
Disenfranchised.

Today,
Made...
Into franchises monopolized.
By...
The greedy.
Breeding...
Franchises monopolized.
On the backs of the poor, hungry and needy.
Fed to feed on vicious lies.
And left to believe,
The ones to trust...
Are the ones who turned their lives to dust.

'Throw to them pennies.
To brighten their blues.
Just throw to them pennies.
They'll find them to use.
For something to value and grin!'


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111 00101010 1011110 101101 111 100100 010011110111 111101111 110010110100 01011100100 1010110010 010011111 101110 011100 01011010 1 11101 10100011101 01 0111111111 111001110 10010111 1100111101 11101 101101101 10110100 01011101010 00111 110001 00111 10100110 1100100 1111100 00111 1010110 1 1 000101110 00111 11 11011111 101 11 1101011 00101111 001 01 1 0110010 1 010 10 10010 10110110010 1111101 01101 0111 101111111 11110 11011 111110 11111 11011001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,682
Words 348
Sentences 51
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 7, 8, 12, 6, 13, 12, 5
Lines Amount 63
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 187
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Written on July 17, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on July 17, 2023

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