Analysis of As I sit here waiting



As I sit here waiting ,I hope your okay.
I think about you night and day.  

i want you to know that your world outside is going to be safe and sound .
Its gonna be lonely with out you around.

Keep your eyes open and watch yourself and be safe.
Be careful  to whom you relate.  
 Stay to yourself if need be. but dont hesitate .

You safely home is THE GOAL.

Take this time to unwind and get some rest and settle your mind .  THINK POSITIVE , YOU GOT THIS!


Scheme AA BB XCC X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101111 11011101 111111111111011101 11011011101 111100101011 11011101 11011111110 1101101 1111010111010111100111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 461
Words 101
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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To my girl doing time.

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Written on May 24, 2023

Submitted by telcome on May 25, 2023

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