Analysis of 18



Young man.
Soon you will be 18.
Graduating from high school.
To enter college.
From an earned and much deserving,
Football scholarship.
Words to say can not express,
Just how proud I am...
Of your efforts endeavored.

You will grow to become,
The man you are meant to be.
Regardless of who approves,
Dislikes to disapprove.
Or welcome the blooming,
You have accomplished to continue to do.
With challenges to come to test,
It will be your faith kept to bring your success.
And all you have to do is your best.
To allow happiness for you to happen!

Congratulations!
So proud of you I will always be.
KLJ


Scheme XAXBCXDXX XAXXCXEDEX XAB
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1111 100111 11010 11101010 110 1111101 11111 1110010 111101 0111111 0101101 01101 110010 11010101011 11001111 11111111101 011111111 10110011110 0010 11111111 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 604
Words 132
Sentences 16
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 10, 3
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Written on May 20, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on May 20, 2023

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