Analysis of A Broken Harlot



A Broken Harlot

Prompt: The Luggage Of Deceit Will Haunt You.

Elenore Saga Part: 3

I found my blue-eyed scarlet
She was where she was supposed to be
Now a broken harlot
Of an old memory

Like an old suitcase
Full of empty souls
Her heart, I must not chase
Sorrow digs angry holes

She begs for me not to go
But I must walk away
The ache begins to grow
I mustn't stray

My Elenore is calling
I have to toss aside this despair
My heart is deeply falling
For her ebony hair

My love, she awaits me
As I quickly dash home
What a sweet beauty
Why did I roam

Her ivory skin is smooth to the touch
My sweet Elenore
I love you so much
I couldn't ask God for more

A.D. Small
April 28, 2023


Scheme A X X ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH BIBI JXJX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 01010 1010101111 100101 1111110 111110111 101010 111100 1111 11101 011111 101101 1111111 111101 010111 1101 1100110 111101101 1111010 101001 111011 111011 10110 1111 0100111101 11100 11111 1101111 11 10
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 686
Words 151
Sentences 4
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Written on April 28, 2023

Submitted by amberp.35129 on May 08, 2023

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