Analysis of Last in love, First in Destiny

Tommy L. Maddox 1972 (North Carolina)



If life is to end then never let it be,
let me love you instead for all eternity.

Let me see your beautiful eyes when I wake,
feel your skin to mine.
Hear your gentle breathing as you wake.

Let me hold you in my arms,
forevermore.
Kiss your lips every minute of the day.

My heart beats
and says your name.
My blood runs hot with passion,
at the thought of you.

You are my destiny and without you,
my love is lost.


Scheme AA BXB XXX XXXC CX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110111 111101110100 11111001111 11111 111010111 1111011 1 11110010101 111 0111 1111110 10111 1111000011 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 418
Words 101
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Written on April 22, 2023

Submitted by tmaddox3 on April 22, 2023

Modified on April 22, 2023

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Tommy L. Maddox

Tommy L. Maddox has traveled the world and seen many wonderful and horrible things. Cursed by demons and been blessed by angels. During a time when he was at a loss for what life was to be about his heart opened up and poetry flowed forth. From there came songs and the need to fill himself with more knowledge of the world. A path that has lead to history, theology, religion, philosophy and the discovery that his ancestors were famous musicians from King George of France and the Queen Elizabeth the 1st to the first musician to hold the title of Master of the Kings Music. (Nicholas "The Younger" Lanier.) All the way forward in time to "A Street Car Named Desire." There are many other aspects from which he came from and has created his own path which continues to develop as he moves forward. more…

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