Analysis of you have 7 missed calls
I’m not sure if this is you.
There wasn’t a name or a message,
just a voice from the void
telling me to leave
a recording after the beep.
I just wanted to hear you,
are you there?
I suppose I can try again
later, tomorrow or
sometime next year.
I’m sorry I can’t seem to
catch you when we’re both
feeling okay.
__________
Hey. It’s me.
I tried to call last night
& the night before.
I can’t get my mind right.
I have maggots in my brain
& the sound of electricity
vibrating off guitar strings
in a way that makes my skin
crawl & my hair grays
before it’s meant to.
All the color is floating on
the notes coming from a screen,
tv, phone, laptop, & scrolling
endlessly scrolling through
the memories of me & you.
Yes, and…
__________
It’s mad love. That’s what I was trying to remember.
When you asked about my favorite oxymoron
because those are the kinds of questions that
make you so much more…interesting? than me.
I asked what yours was and you smiled
and held your salted rim to the kind
of lips that keep you dreaming of
how they might taste, feel…
I’m rambling.
Call me.
__________
I have a new number.
I thought you should have it
in case you should feel so
inclined to use it.
Formality is the new me.
__________
Are you okay?
I had the strangest dream
that we were floating apart
in the darkest water
I’ve ever seen.
I woke up sweating and dialed
your number before I realized
it’s after midnight and you
fall asleep early when
you’re lonely.
Maybe it’s me that’s drowning.
Maybe it’s just me.
Just me.
__________
I know I promised to stop
calling, feeling so much
It’s hard to not think of you.
I heard you got a new place.
I hope it’s small enough
to make you feel
safe.
God, I just
love you.
__________
Okay, this is the last one
I swear.
You don’t believe me,
do you?
I can feel your doubt
coursing through
the phone
line.
Please, don’t stop
listening.
Don’t forget the sound
of my voice.
The music has become
static & I’m scared.
What if it has died?
What if you’ve died
& all these messages
are my way of holding
on to you to love.
Don’t be gone.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111111 11011010 101101 10111 00101001 1110111 111 10111101 10011 111 1101111 11101 101 1 111 111111 0101 111111 1110011 0110100 1001011 0011111 1111 01111 10101101 0110101 11111 10011 0100111 10 1 1111111101010 111011100110 0111011101 1111110011 11111011 011101101 11111101 11111 110 11 1 110110 111111 011111 01111 01001011 1 111 110101 1101001 001010 1101 11110010 11001110 110101 101101 110 1011110 10111 11 1 1111011 101011 1111111 1111011 111101 1111 1 111 11 1 111011 11 11011 11 11111 101 01 1 111 100 10101 111 010101 1011 11111 1111 11100 111110 11111 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 2,170 |
Words | 461 |
Sentences | 39 |
Stanzas | 22 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 2, 7, 4, 6, 7, 4, 4, 3, 4, 2, 5, 7, 2, 7, 3, 2, 2, 8, 3, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 92 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 72 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
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Submitted by darqjuliet on March 23, 2023
Modified by darqjuliet on March 23, 2023
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