Analysis of Words finality

Barry W Smith 1963 (Laon)



The time has come
I do regret
That words I spoke
I did not vet

If I could eat
The words I've said
I would eat and eat
Until they're dead

I'd have a meal
Of all I spoke
I'd cram them down
And try not to choke

The memories of them
Would be gone for good
No longer harming
As only words could

But eat I can't
Try as I may
Once out of the mouth
That's where they stay


Scheme XABA CDCD XBXB XEXE XFXF
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 0111 1101 1111 1111 1111 0111 11101 0111 1101 1111 1111 01111 010011 11111 11010 11011 1111 1111 11101 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 367
Words 85
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

This poem brings me back to reality when I get to thinking too much about my abilities, as if I have it all together. How many times I spoke first then thought.

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Written on August 15, 2018

Submitted by baways on March 18, 2023

Modified on April 28, 2023

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Barry W Smith

I'm a Christian, husband, father and Bepa to one granddaughter. I live in the panhandle of Texas. more…

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