Analysis of I'm going



He knew.
He made his demands.
"You'll get the same as everybody else."
He threw.
He knew.
His spirit couldn't stand in his weakness too.
"I can't live with you." He decreed.
I knew.
His eyes closed too long.
He wasn't going to pull through.
It wasn't my last home.
Not yet. They shewed and fell over my life.
The black sheep.
I still weep.
But I didn't need.
Not anymore.
Too much water.
The bridge already broken.


Scheme AbcaAadaeafghhdijk
Poetic Form
Metre 11 11101 110111001 11 11 11010101101 11111101 11 11111 11010111 110111 1111011011 011 111 11101 101 1110 0101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 416
Words 96
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 307
Words per stanza (avg) 78
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Written on March 12, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 12, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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