Analysis of The Day God Called Your Name



The Day God Called Your Name

We did not know when we awoke,
what grief was on the way,
Had no idea that God had said,
“You are coming home Today”…

A moment changed our lives for good,
you were gone without a word:
Speechless, shocked we listened,
to the news we had just heard…

So many things were left unsaid,
so many plans unraveled;
The years now just a memory,
that together we had travelled…

One day we hope to see your face
Hold you in our warm embrace
In a land that knows no tears,
Where loss is something no-one fears


Scheme X XABA XCXC BDXD EEXX
Poetic Form
Metre 011111 11111101 111101 110101111 1110101 010110111 1010101 101110 1011111 11010101 1101010 01110100 10101110 11111111 11010101 0011111 11110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 547
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

My husband passed so suddenly and unexpectedly, it brought such emotions to my children and me. He is still in our hearts, loved and remembered everyday

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Written on February 05, 2023

Submitted by carmenc4you on February 06, 2023

Modified on April 03, 2023

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Carmen Johnston

I entered and was awarded a medal for one poem with you about 15 years ago. I write for the love of it, as my experiences in life continue... more…

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