Analysis of Croz

John Leinberger 1963 (USA)



Croz
 
The day I heard you died
I almost cut my hair
Guinnevere echoed through the halls
And drifted up the stairs.
Now my nights are lonely
And will never be the same
But they’ll be a little better
If I can only remember my name.
 
So carry me my friend
Homeward through the haze
Be my shadow captain
For the remainder of my days
Your voice above the rest
My aching soul does stir
When my wooden ship sets sail
It’s your voice I will hear.


Scheme A BCAADEFE GAHAIFJK
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1 011111 11111 110101 010101 111110 0110101 11101010 1111001011 1 110111 10101 11110 10010111 110101 110111 1110111 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 446
Words 91
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 345
Words per stanza (avg) 89

About this poem

I have a good musician friend who is a big David Crosby fan. I wrote this as a small tribute when he passed earlier in the year.

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Written on January 20, 2023

Submitted by ileini86 on February 22, 2023

Modified on April 11, 2023

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