Analysis of A Lingering Hurt



A Lingering hurt
By Nancy Rodriquez

As drugs slowly take over your mind,
and darkness reaps the benefits of your soul,
within me, I find it harder to find,
you have been sinking to a new low,
One day you are happy and in control,
the next, you do not wish to bother,
A lingering hurt is then felt in my soul,
and fresh tears are falling one after another,
The heartbreak cries out for the pain to go,
and I am questioning if we knew love at all,
it is a hard pill to swallow,
and the next move is your call,
inside, I feel hallow,
You once were my Superman, who could never fall,
Our lives entwined no more, shattered in pieces.


Scheme XX ABACBDBDCECECEX
Poetic Form
Metre 01001 110010 111011011 01010100111 0111111011 111101011 1111100001 011111110 01001111011 011110110010 011110111 011100111111 11011110 0011111 011110 110110011101 101011110010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 629
Words 139
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 15
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 243
Words per stanza (avg) 62

About this poem

My Boyfriend is in crisis.

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Written on March 03, 2023

Submitted by txpoet65 on March 04, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nancy Rodriquez

I have been writing poetry since I was 14 years old. I am now 57. I live in Fort Worth, Texas. I plan to have two children's books published by the Summer of 2023. "Elroy the Elephant, and Charlie the Squirrel. Both have my poetry in them. more…

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