Analysis of Collateral Heart Damage



She was going to Aunt Zella’s

Mom was away at the Lawyer’s

Dad on business in South Korea.

Zella was loaded, sent a Chauffeur.

Inherited husband’s largesse.

Big name Art Dealer.

Debra had a lot to process.

On went her earphones usually.

Or some escapist Sci-Fi novel.

Liked Robert Sawyer the best.

WWW Trilogy for example.

But all around Debra

Was non-fiction, painful, angering.

Parents like the children.

Small triggers in the everyday.

Debra felt like some sort

Of Midway Prize.

Big smile, clown-like

Ribbons swirled all around.

Long heirloom dress.

And Both were out of Town.

They were the Clowns.

Nothing but frowns.


Scheme A A B C A C A X D X D B X X X X A X X A X A A
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 11011010 111001010 11101001 01001001 11110 1010111 11011000 1111110 1101001 11001010 110110 111010100 101010 11000101 101111 111 1111 101101 111 010111 1001 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 749
Words 161
Sentences 22
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 21
Words per stanza (avg) 5
Font size:
 

Written on February 20, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 20, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

48 sec read
3

Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

All Doug Blair poems | Doug Blair Books

2 fans

Discuss this Doug Blair poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Collateral Heart Damage" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 30 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/151982/collateral-heart-damage>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    0
    days
    2
    hours
    50
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The word "poetry" is from the Greek term "poiesis", which means?
    A Reading
    B Writing
    C Saying
    D Making