Analysis of When Hell is closing in



I never meant to become
My own worst enemy
Sometimes it feels like I'm running around in circles
A dog chasing after its own tail
With nothing stopping me
Or standing in my way
Point taken let’s not make any more mistakes
When hell is closing in, the real journey begins
The gates open wide welcoming the crowd.
Hastening the furry
When hell is closing in
Time slows down.
Reality freezes
The sulfuric atmosphere ignites the soul.
Now the will has been broken.
Another son has fallen
When Hell is closing in


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101101 111100 0111111001010 011010111 110101 110011 11011110101 111100011001 0110110001 100010 111100 111 1010 0010100101 1011110 0101110 111100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 510
Words 97
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 409
Words per stanza (avg) 92
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Written on February 18, 2023

Submitted by DerrickECarey on February 18, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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