My Immortal Salvation
Derrick E Carey 1981 (Sarasota)
Take your time my friend
These chains won't hold me forever
Soon you'll learn
Eternity isn't your friend
You’re trapped inside of an illusion
Amongst all of the chaos and confusion
You believe
That you defeated me
Trying to stop
The unenviable
I chose my own fate
When I walked out of heavens gates
I was welcomed by the darkness of men
Broken down, torn apart
And then separated into seven sins
Cased away and imprisoned
By my own desire
I long to be alive and free again
But I only had one chance at this
My Immortal Salvation
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Written on February 18, 2023
Submitted by DerrickECarey on February 18, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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| Scheme | ABCADDEFGHIJKLMNBKOD |
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| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 532 |
| Words | 101 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 20 |
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