Analysis of I BREATHE

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I breathe, yet I do not know what I live. I am getting those messages again in the early hours of the morning from family, lovers, friends, and even strangers. I have dreams of other people's memories that are not mine. I try to say in a silent voice you are not alone. We are all connected.

I have a heart that always seems to bleed whenever I sit back and look ahead to breathe. The question is not what I am dying for, yet what I am living for, being nothing is mine. Everything is different as it is the same, even the raindrops.


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Characters 534
Words 107
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 207
Words per line (avg) 53
Letters per stanza (avg) 207
Words per stanza (avg) 53

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Written on February 17, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on February 17, 2023

Modified by Oakley on April 16, 2023

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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