Analysis of An Oldster’s Psalm…71



You have always been there
Showing good paths
Good motives.
You have trumped
My enemies, detractors
In their foolish self assuraces.
Godless they are.
And doomed.
So WHAT NOW?
I have lost power, tightness
Of grip, wrenching,
Sawing or nailing.
Quickness of comeback.
Strength in torso.
I know.
I can still speak your Name
Your Fame.
To generations to come.
Sorely needing a
HEART’S HOME.
Amen.


Scheme ABCDEBFGHIJJKLLMMNOPQ
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1011 110 111 1100010 011011 1011 01 111 1111010 1110 10110 1011 101 11 111111 11 101011 10100 11 01
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 395
Words 79
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 310
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Written on February 16, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 16, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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