Analysis of Ache

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



My body aches now
I tell the old and the young
But not the angels
My knees bend both ways
My back is bruised by my mistakes
My arms held out too long
I repeat it again and again
My body aches
But nobody comes to heal
I haven't asked God yet
Or myself
I'm still, strong
Nobody is going to wheel me around
I'm a walking gal
But my body aches now


Scheme ABCDEFGEHIJFKLA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (47%)
Metre 11011 1101001 11010 11111 11111101 111111 101101001 1101 11111 110111 11 111 111011101 10101 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 343
Words 73
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 267
Words per stanza (avg) 73
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Written on February 07, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 06, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on February 06, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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