The sparing



As the forte was held in st legion the gladiator took the avenged through the gate and spared his people need for food.
Taking one pilgrim to his quarters and maintaining her dignity to gain vital Information on the approaching positions of the foreign armies. He introduced himself as the cheif defender of the sovereign army Atius Marlos Sadunai.
The pilgrim watched him eagerly to determine his angle of battle then slowly realised by his kind repose that he would not be raped as he was in childhood by ceaser nor tortured as his family had just been by the common army.
They made intimate love and slept for an hour holding each others mind together after the eased return from battle.
Then Atius planned his approach against the north region to report to the senit.
2 discussion with senit, argument belittlement and fear of the approaching army
3 battle prep gladiator training clothes, warning that the armies approaching were heavily fortified
4 family love, gifts, eating, children playing swords/special child cirius learns about social politics and meets John the baptist, wife siesa creating tapestry for her sister
5war positions, hiding, deaths capture escape, recall, the pilgrim man cute speach to the senit (my family are suffering famine from the drout and are in dier need of sufferage)
6 return changes arriving to trade from the east, New uniform being soldered, silk scarf gift for sister in law, deep conversation about love (I will take her hand in marriage tonight. And after you consumate your child should be named after your father. He must be raised with love from the Gods, I will prepare for a baptism in the fall. Very well my lord.)
7special religious purchase for his mother (a symbol of odin? ) and herbs for his sick father promises of safety, say the mystic advised sparing use of the alixer on father's chest and neck.
8 father's death with ruler betrayal of the commander seen by a child (poisened ointment) and told to Atius,(Atius I saw Ceaser take the life of Father. When did this happen? At the second hour. He must be avenged. But how shall we do it? You will inform the senit and they will seek their punishment (war with the Iranian army) .
9 personal battle and defeat of the commander of the north, rising tensions within the senit against the current ceaser)
10 Atius becomes commander but is not respected for his lack of promiscuity raises questions about his power and endurance.
10.5 Atius meets the christ and moral lesson about the innocent value of each life. A vision from God is as the air, it can flow in any shape or direction but it aways returns to the point of life.
11 ultimate end of roman army leadership but Atius survives injured then dies really sad death from disloyalty on battle field tent by wifes sister and her lover in cesars family after watching his affair with the disloyal pilgrim is revealed.
12 wife Siesa kills herself with starvation and loneliness after moving to the byzantine empire in the east
13 child 2 rises to become cyrus military stratagist integrating the Iranian tribes against lydia
14 child 1 cirius under new germanic leadership becomes a scholar (highlights child love of life interest above grown into adult loving relationship) (intelligent conversation about the statements of christ (God does not rule by power he rules by choice and his pure free will and instinct is never mistaken ) , mathematical obligations in the first integrated school, (addition, subtraction and division)
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Written on October 21, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 20, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on October 21, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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