Analysis of Father's voice



Don't take what you have for granted

I found myself sitting in a park
one evening nearing dusk
while observing a retiring sun
gradually ascending into the horizon

My wandering thoughts
began to dwell upon my childhood
when I heard a man's authoritative voice
calling out to his son
the small child frowned
as these words I found

To hear my father's voice
you have experienced what some
can merely imagine
I would relinquish any year
if only you knew
any time

Allow your heart to be consumed
by gratitude

Rest warm knowing the security
and wisdom of a patriarch embraces you
nothing will ever compare nor replace him
your pillar of strength and refuge
his own life easily would be offered for yours

Be mindful when grown seated at a park upon a
certain day
reflect on this invaluable experience
how I long to share this knowledge
youthful man of tomorrow

Do not take what you have for granted


Scheme A XXBB XXCBDD CXBXEX XX XEXXX XXXXX A
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11111110 11110001 110101 101000101 1000010010010 11001 01110111 1110101001 101111 0111 11111 111101 11010011 110010 11010101 11011 101 01111101 110 111000100 01010100101 1011001111 11011010 111100111011 1101110101010 101 011101000100 11111110 101101 111111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 900
Words 169
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 6, 6, 2, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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Don't take what you have for granted

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Submitted by markl.65734 on February 06, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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