Analysis of To Feel Forever



My lips kiss the sun

My forever won

A world only hay field

The sky honey and golden

I sit in the warmth

My thoughts silently look

Into the peace

Into every nook

I wait for noone

I am in my light

My being is there

As released insight

When I wander there

Every touch is a story

An endless kiss

A healed army

My world is filled with love

And it seeps through my skin

To fly is to emerse

For glory a new win

Sometimes I leave

And I live a life here

But my world is bereaved

And my heart turns its stear

Yet I hope here so long

And the time collects tears

One day I'll show you

How it feels in my worth


Scheme A A X A X B X B X C D C D E X E X F X F X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 10101 011011 0110010 11001 111001 0101 011001 1111 11011 11011 1011 11101 10011010 1101 0110 111111 011111 111101 110011 0111 011011 111101 011111 111111 001011 11111 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 625
Words 156
Sentences 1
Stanzas 28
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 17
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Written on February 01, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 01, 2023

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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