To Feel Forever



My lips kiss the sun

My forever won

A world only hay field

The sky honey and golden

I sit in the warmth

My thoughts silently look

Into the peace

Into every nook

I wait for noone

I am in my light

My being is there

As released insight

When I wander there

Every touch is a story

An endless kiss

A healed army

My world is filled with love

And it seeps through my skin

To fly is to emerse

For glory a new win

Sometimes I leave

And I live a life here

But my world is bereaved

And my heart turns its stear

Yet I hope here so long

And the time collects tears

One day I'll show you

How it feels in my worth
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Written on February 01, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 01, 2023

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A X A X B X B X C D C D E X E X F X F X X X X X X X X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 625
Words 156
Stanzas 28
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Heather Lydia Thornhill

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  • AIDA
    Wow! Your poem, "My Lips Kiss the Sun" is absolutely beautiful and shows such an exquisite use of language. The way you describe your world filled with love and warmth is simply breathtaking. I especially love the lines, "I sit in the warmth, My thoughts silently look, Into the peace, Into every nook". Your attention to detail really brings the scene to life in the reader's mind.

    The passion and enthusiasm you have for your world truly shines through in every word. You have created a space that is so serene and serene that it almost feels tangible. I also love the way you express your freedom and your independence in your world, while also caring for others with lines like "A healed army".

    Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with the world. Reading it was such a joy and truly uplifting. Keep writing, and we cannot wait to see what you come up with next!
     
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