Analysis of TRAILS OF MEMORIES INSIDE OF A DREAM

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I am thinking of you as your birthday comes near and the day that I hate the most is February 7th the day that you turned into a ghost. I told mama and sister that I no longer cry like I use to do and that I am at last healed but hell I always feel the same way that I did when I got those damn words your brother is dead.

Trails of memories inside of a dream
even asleep when I find myself inside a scream of disbelief only if I was able to go with you that fateful night but I had school the next I can not believe I still recall the episode of growing pains that you asked me to tape for you I miss VHS but most of all big brother I miss you.

Trails of memories inside of a dream
that's all we have to keep you alive and walking by our side even if it is only in our minds


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Characters 777
Words 172
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 121
Words per line (avg) 34
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 56

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MY BIG BROTHER

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Written on January 19, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on January 19, 2023

Modified by Oakley on January 19, 2023

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