Analysis of RAIN

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I sit here listening to the music that brings back memories of my youth when I thought that I knew everything about nothing, hell I was such a little shit. now that I am getting older and after my last health scare on the mend I wish I could build a blanket fort and hide inside of the rain only to play pretend.

I love listening to the sound of the drops hitting the roof top but there are those moments when the tears just will not stop. the soundtrack of my life keeps on playing the songs knowing the words to sing to my tired body, mind, and soul.

I wonder if all the Gods, Queens. Ghost of all the Kings can ever put me back again without tripping the wire of my dying desire for the pain that hides deep inside of the rain


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Characters 732
Words 151
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 192
Words per line (avg) 49
Letters per stanza (avg) 192
Words per stanza (avg) 49

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FEELINGS OR WEATHER IDK

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Written on January 12, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on January 12, 2023

Modified on April 26, 2023

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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