Analysis of Release
I see the verse in you
the meter in your heart
I'm begging
for the next line
I'm logging
every error of momentary bliss
that stanzas of grace lead
me through your your mind
yes. your mind
it's time for me to stroke
your magic space
and invoke
a soft irregular syncopated rythem
revoked
by your inner pain
release pacifies the rhyme
in half-step time
divining the divine
release pacifies the half-step
release, a soft stroke
I want your pleasure to
exceed pure limit
I want each measure of
your verse to release
as release pacifies
your breath to beat
your earth to heat
all eternity
in time
your release
your last line
Scheme | AXBCBDXEE FXFGXX GGCXF AXXHDIIXGH C |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110101 010011 110 1011 110 1001011001 110111 11111 111 111111 1101 001 0101001001 01 11101 01101 0111 010001 011011 01011 111101 01110 111101 11101 1011 1111 1111 10100 01 101 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 623 |
Words | 118 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 6, 5, 10, 1 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 16 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 100 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
for someone who I adore
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