Analysis of Pinned with Holes
A black sheet, pinned with holes
Designed to enshroud us
Weighing us down with infertile
Visions
Enforcing the perpetual
Myth that we can never overthrow
The very gods designed
For no other purpose than
To chain us by their immobile feet
Pounding their stakes into our
Minds- whispering as fog
That the stars are nothing more
Than planets, and the sun is a ball
Of gas.
However, long before Gods, the
Stars not only existed, they reigned
And stood, titanic crowns overlooking
A beatdown people as a symbol for
A greater light that grew by the day
Within our ancestors, compelling them
To move from caves and into the sun-
Long before the name of Ra was
Given to the sun, it was worshiped
As itself
Before man attempted understanding
Limiting- controlling
With a name
The name diluting the glory of
A sheer simple existence
Leading to the decline of man
And with the name, came the loss
The loss of hope and the degradation
Of potential
The falsehood was perpetuated
The sheet draped from above us could
Never be removed, the stars a hopeless
destination.
And so we lay beneath a black sheet
Pinned with holes
Designed to enshroud us
Weighing us down with infertile
Visions
Scheme | aBCD cxxef xxgxx xxhgxxi xxxhh x xxexic xxbi faBCD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011111 011011 10111010 10 01000100 11111010 010101 1110101 111110101 10110110 110011 1011101 110001101 11 1010110 111001011 010101100 011010101 010111101 0110100101 111100101 10101111 101011110 101 011010010 100010 101 010100101 0110010 10100111 0101101 011100010 1010 0110100 01110111 1010101010 010 011101011 111 011011 10111010 10 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,198 |
Words | 229 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 5, 5, 7, 5, 1, 6, 4, 5 |
Lines Amount | 42 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 106 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem as a reflection of the limiting nature of mortal men's reasoning.
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Written on November 23, 2022
Submitted by nathans.74557 on December 05, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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