Analysis of Breaking Down Low

Riaan Smit 1988 (Windhoek)



Seen the signs on the road,
I’ve missed them all
Don’t know which way to go,
I’ll land where I fall.
Going to go where I’m taken, hope to see you there
Resting on easy on the other side
Lord knows I’ll be shaking these shackles from me
Oh it's gonna be helluva ride
Cause I’veBeen living so high, now I’m breaking down low

That sweet simple life is so hard crack,
Every time I get closer I keep falling off track
Got to hold on dearly to what I got left:
my family , friends and the treble clef.


Scheme XABAXCXCB DDXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101101 1111 111111 11111 1011111011111 1011010101 11111011011 11101101 111011111011 111011111 10011110111011 11111011111 1100100101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 515
Words 106
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 4
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 190
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Written on December 21, 2018

Submitted by tribeone_b on January 04, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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