Analysis of Hoe Vêr Is Die Hemel?



Neem alles nou soos dit kom
Omdat ons niks weet van die toekoms, nie
Ons droome le nou en wag
Vir n antwoord oor die vraag

Hoe ver is die hemel?
Wanneer dans ons weer op heuwels
En Hoe lank moet ons nog wag?
Vir ons kaans om die nag weer te vat?

Ek is bang vir my vriende
Want die rowwe tye het pas begin
Ek is bekommerd oor my gesin
Hulle ly honger en dit maak niks sin

Ek was my hande
Met bloed van verlange

Kyk rond, dis die hemel
Hier dans one weer op heuwels
Ons hoef nie meer te wag nie
Vir ons kans om die nag weer te vat nie


Scheme XABB CDBE EFAF EX CDAA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11111111 110111 111111 111110 111111 11110111 111111111 111111 11111101 111111 11111111 1111 1111 111110 1011111 11110111 1111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 540
Words 123
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on October 06, 2020

Submitted by tribeone_b on January 04, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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