Analysis of The pieces of my heart

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)



My soul is lost
My spirit is broken
And my heart is shattered
Into a million pieces

One thick wicked shard
Was broken in my childhood
By the blade of a low birth
And the abuse of an orphanage

A long sharp shard
That cuts deeper than a sword
Is the loneliness of my heart
And the solitude of my soul

A large fractalised piece
Shows the glimmers of my broken dreams
The stubs of shattered hopes
And the dying embers of all my wishes

One long needle-like shard
That bores right into my soul
Is the wicked hex of a curse
That led to my broken world


Scheme XXXX AXXX AXXB XXXX ABXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 1111 110110 011110 0101010 11101 110011 1011011 000111100 0111 1110101 10100111 0010111 0111 101011101 011101 00101011110 111011 1110111 10101101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 548
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Submitted by GIDRAF on December 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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