Analysis of This lonely house

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)



The empty rooms are my empty heart
Cold and draughty with loneliness
The shattered window shutters
Are the shattered pieces of my heart
The broken door hinges are my dreams
The ones that always remain in my sleep
The leaning roof with holes
Mirrors my heavily battered soul
The creaking staircases and landings
Are the bruises and aches of my spirit
This lonely house I live in
Is the loneliness I live


Scheme ABCADEFGHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 010111101 1011100 0101010 101010111 010110111 011101011 010111 101100101 01010010 1010011110 1101110 1010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 402
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 331
Words per stanza (avg) 72

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Submitted by GIDRAF on December 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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