Analysis of SEPTABLE POINT



Can there be any more good ones? Romantic nostalgia, stray glances on a scorching summer afternoon? - I tried, I did my best: foolishly, with stubborn disobedience - as was always my custom and instinct - I tried to steal a kiss with a kiss of compliments, and dared to believe: That I alone could not proclaim Don Quixote's aimless romance, And believed that the stars, seductively flirting, might yet be caught by my half-assed, misguided stumbling: My patronage of a culture still alive,

unbroken and tweaked creed: a joy cherished in rich repositories of hearts, that I was not only comforted by the music of words: with precious messages I would have hidden from the world to escape! - I know: memory fades fast - like attention - I would have sought the secrets of hearts, like a lost comet!

Yet I am often a dying fish, caught in a trap of emotions, who flees to his stubborn and priceless naivety, because he wants to believe with the soul of a child: the other troublesome and troublesome things of the world can still be fixed! And the fallible morality of men is no taboo subject! - Let the present tell me if the vulnerability of my past is the secret weakness of my past

The future that chases uncertainty? - But alas! - I must feel that the cherished example of posterity in generations has ceased - and therefore it is necessary that, besides selfish obstinacy, the vulnerable point in me should be put right: my conscience!


Scheme X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111010010110101010011111111001100100111110010111101101110001101110111011110010011010100101111111101010011001010101 010011011001010011111110100101011110100111101011011110011101011110101110110 1111001011001101011111001010111101101101010100010011011111001000100111101011010111000100111101010111 01011001001011111010010101000010110111100101101000010001011111110
Characters 1,445
Words 263
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 284
Words per line (avg) 65
Letters per stanza (avg) 284
Words per stanza (avg) 65

About this poem

In each poem, lyrical layers follow each other, build on each other. Just like they are integral parts of the past and memories.

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Written on December 10, 2022

Submitted by oasev on December 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:19 min read
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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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