Analysis of Undeserving I
Raymond Navarro Jr 1974 (Houston, TX)
Just another teen fable....?
Dairy Queen blizzards on a sunset
Secret country road tables
Bus stops on the go
Out of time in a Colorado snow
Texas dreams come true
Rings from Atlanta to the Camp
Four leaf clovers and bonnets of blue
A Dad with your hand in my hand
All the love in the world I seen in your eyes
All the heavens never could compare to the life in our children's eyes
Tears of joy I cried
Grandbabies taking my heart to flight
After bus stops and snow
Leaving you never could be a forgiveness I deserve
Only by the grace of God and Family love I know
| Scheme | XXXAA BXBX CCXX AXA |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1010110 10110101 1010110 11101 111000101 10111 11010101 1110111 01111011 10100111011 101010101101010101 11111 10101111 101101 10110110010101 10101110100111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 576 |
| Words | 123 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 5, 4, 4, 3 |
| Lines Amount | 16 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
About this poem
Application of family
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Written on November 18, 2022
Submitted by asja77437 on November 18, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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