Undeserving I

Raymond Navarro Jr 1974 (Houston, TX)



Just another teen fable....?
Dairy Queen blizzards on a sunset
Secret country road tables
Bus stops on the go
Out of time in a Colorado snow

Texas dreams come true
Rings from Atlanta to the Camp
Four leaf clovers and bonnets of blue
A Dad with your hand in my hand

All the love in the world I seen in your eyes
All the heavens never could compare to the life in our children's eyes
Tears of joy I cried
Grandbabies taking my heart to flight

After bus stops and snow
Leaving you never could be a forgiveness I deserve
Only by the grace of God and Family love I know

About this poem

Application of family

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Written on November 18, 2022

Submitted by asja77437 on November 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXAA BXBX CCXX AXA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 576
Words 123
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 3

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