Analysis of Retrospect



I see her
I am curious
I feel things
and was told not to

She is thin
speaks the best
broken English
and sweet words

We see a play
she takes my hand
then my thigh
and I feel scared

Then there is pasta
I get an invite
to her house
and decline

She is sad
asks me if I
want pleasure
and to enjoy me

I leave her
by the pasta
drive away
and cry

because I felt something.


Scheme AXXX XXXX BXCX DXXX XCAX ADBC X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (68%)
Metre 110 11100 111 01111 111 101 1010 011 1101 1111 111 0111 11110 11101 101 001 111 1111 110 01011 110 1010 101 01 011110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 381
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 41
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

This poem reflects the internal thoughts and struggle I had on my first date with a woman (wanting love and to be loved by a woman for the first time in my life). It isn’t something my family or parts of society would have accepted, and I was frustrated/sad/confused all at the same time.

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Written on February 10, 2022

Submitted by hfoster089 on November 27, 2022

Modified on April 06, 2023

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H.B. Foster

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